First try (Critical)

Here you can see my version of Main-Lining. Looks so easy when done in videos, but I made a couple of mistakes along the way. Tried to document a couple of them. The critical is very forgiving, almost no stunted grow after rigorous hst, recovering stems after snapping them by accident. The Pineapple Express gets the LST, but seems to stay very small. Pests aren’t completely gone, but thrips damage seems to be under control. Nutrients only self made worm tea Can I do things better? Any recommendations?