Hey, nice update, they definitely look better than before.
From what I can see, the nutrient issue is improving. The newer growth looks healthier and greener, which is always the best sign. The yellowing on the older leaves won’t really recover, but that’s normal, what matters is that the plant is growing out of the problem, and yours seems to be doing exactly that.
About your LST, you did a solid job. The idea is to open up the canopy and bring the side branches up, and you’re clearly achieving that. Those bud clips are doing their job and you’re getting a more even structure, which will help a lot later with light distribution.
Just one small tip: keep an eye that the clips or ties don’t cut into the stems as they thicken. Give them a bit of room to expand.
From here, I’d just keep things consistent. Don’t overcorrect with nutrients, stay balanced, and let her keep pushing new healthy growth.
You’re on the right track, nice work. 🙏👌