The Iron deficiency diagnosis is good , the solution is good too . The ph range diagnosis is good as the sweet spot in soil is 6.5 BUT I disagree with the "Optimal pH should be
7(neutral) or better 7.3 to 7.5 but not to high" because optimal ph in soil is in the 6 to 7 ph range so no worries in that range , better use the average 6.5 value to avoid any ph issue