While i am gun-shy from my last attempt following a successful one, i'd say it looks good. I can see multiple layers of leaves compared to the june 1st photos, and still complete a canopy. Still some leaves up top to power nearby growth.
i've seen more. i've seen less... i don't dare to say with confidence what is absolutely is best, but likely depends on the plant.
stick with this and maybe try one or the other next time.. the pictures for reference will help. never take more than a third off, from what i read.